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Thursday, April 23, 2015

I think the most interesting part in my book so far is when the the second bus backed into the first bus because the kids were trapped inside the first bus and had no way to get out of the bus. That is when the second bus backed into the first and got the remaining kids out of the bus. After the driver of the second bus got the remaining kids out of the first, the first bus blew up because of the hail storm. There were some kids that were still in the bus but couldn't get out and died in the explosion. The kids who did get out were terrified because they never had anything happen that scary in their life before.

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The most exciting thing that has happend in my book is the storm. How big the hail was in the book it destroy the 1st bus. And they had to run into a store to protect them for the storm because their was alot of hail in that storm. When the 6 kids came out of the bus exploded then they all stay inside the store. Then they had to stay their. Then they had to fix the air condisning so they wouldn't get hot.S they went up their with all od the hail and the hail hand broke holes in it so the fixed it with tape.

Tuesday, April 21, 2015

The storm is the most affective in our story. Because the storm starts when they are on the bus the hail hits the bus and some of the kids die and the bus driver. The second bus crashed into the store so they can be protected and then the second bus driver went to help some of the kids out of the bus. But the bus exploded and Ms. Wolly got 10 of the 16 kids out of the bus before the bus exploded.Then they have to stay in the store until the storm stops. The leave the go to the hospital and  come back to the store. The store had food and tv they had emergcy kit. They were all ok just that some of them were borad and throwing up. The storm was making noise and they were scared that one of the hail ball would come throw the roof? The bus driver would be looking out the window.
The setting effects the mood by the storm that is going on can make you scared because of the way the kids are acting and what they are doing. When the hail started coming down, the kids were getting hit with the hail and they started to bleed and that can change the mood to a scary mood. At the beginning of the story it was a worried mood because alex and his brother thought they were going to miss the bus and didn't know what was going to go on that that day. On the second bus, it was a scary mood because the bus driver drove through the wall at the store and there were little kids on the bus. The whole way through the book it is a scary mood. Now there is a gas leak going on and that is scaring the kids. The older kids are trying to keep the younger kids calmed down.