Tuesday, April 21, 2015
The storm is the most affective in our story. Because the storm starts when they are on the bus the hail hits the bus and some of the kids die and the bus driver. The second bus crashed into the store so they can be protected and then the second bus driver went to help some of the kids out of the bus. But the bus exploded and Ms. Wolly got 10 of the 16 kids out of the bus before the bus exploded.Then they have to stay in the store until the storm stops. The leave the go to the hospital and come back to the store. The store had food and tv they had emergcy kit. They were all ok just that some of them were borad and throwing up. The storm was making noise and they were scared that one of the hail ball would come throw the roof? The bus driver would be looking out the window.
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So, that is quite a crazy setting! What is the mood of the main character? How did this setting make you feel?
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